ext_1622 ([identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wordsontongue 2009-07-22 07:59 pm (UTC)

I love this! A really wonderful format, beautifully playing with the five senses and the metaphor of breath. This is quite beautifully done, with a lovely, deft touch, and I'm really fond of how it all plays out. An exhilarating, comforting story.

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