http://vbmods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] vbmods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wordsontongue2010-07-04 04:02 am
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Drawn Blinds

Title: Drawn Blinds
Author: [livejournal.com profile] savageseraph
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] caras_galadhon
Prompt(s): #21: a picture of MacDougal Street in New York
Disclaimer: Never happened. Just nice to think about.
Summary: The windows piqued Viggo's interest.



The pictures, Viggo thought, tipping his head to study them critically, came out better than he'd hoped. He wasn't planning a photo shoot the afternoon he wandered through the Village, but the line of row houses caught his eye and coaxed him into lingering long past when Sean expected him back with some fresh-baked French bread and the Èclairs that managed to stow away in the bottom of the bag.

As Sean knocked about in the kitchen, Viggo sat at the computer and studied one of the pictures of the houses. He touched the monitor with a fingertip, running it along the wrought-iron fire escapes, tracing squares around the windows sensibly shuttered by drape or blind. The windows piqued Viggo's interest. He wondered what he'd see if he was able to draw the coverings and peer inside. Would they be sensible rooms with sturdy, comfortable furniture? Whimsical rooms with painted murals on the walls and an explosion of children's toys on the floor? Serious rooms with dark wood desks and bookshelves whose contents were organized by author and genre?

The smell of braised beef, garlic, and wine coming from the kitchen made Viggo's stomach growl, and he laughed softly, as he stood, stretched, and then headed for the kitchen and for Sean. He passed their spare bedroom, the blinds open to let in the light, and paused. They wouldn't be later when Sean put up the frame and the sling, helped him into it, bound him so he was open for Sean's whims.

No passerby would be able to see him, mouth stretched around a gag, body twisting and struggling as the plug Sean slid into him vibrated, teasing him while Sean bound his cock and balls in tight black leather. They wouldn't see Sean pull up a chair after he removed the plug so he could fuck Viggo, first with his fingers, then with his fist. They wouldn't see Viggo's body and hips jerking at the thrusts, his cock twitching as if it was trying to break free of its bonds.

Viggo groaned, pressing his palm firmly against his fly and his erection. He licked his lips as much at the thought of being on display for the neighbors as he did at the prospect of the dinner waiting for him. Maybe a bit more.

And maybe tonight, if Sean was willing to indulge him, Viggo would ask him to leave the blinds open.

[identity profile] j-flattermann.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 12:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Mind games are the best. Yeah.

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep. I couldn't agree more.

[identity profile] rifleman-s.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 12:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved the contrasts between the themes of domesticy and voyeurism - real or perceived - running through this.

And the last line really adds the spice!

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it! ^_^

[identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
You just got to love Sean's whims and Viggo's kinks. Marvellous fic.
Edited 2010-07-04 13:34 (UTC)

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! *beams*

[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm. Very tasty. I quite like how you've used the prompt picture, and I love Viggo's musings, and the contrast between Sean doing the more "domestic" things in this piece, and then moving into the extremely dominant role at the end. Yum.

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooo. I hadn't thought about that. COOL!

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
what i wouldn't give to see that. all the little details of what sean is going to do to him...! no wonder viggo was all hard in anticipation.

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
You can't really blame him, can you? *winks*

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 05:42 am (UTC)(link)
At first I was surprised by the shift from Viggo's architectural/interior design musings to his porny musings, but then I realized how cleverly you maintained the thread of his thoughts through his perceptions. That was really delightful. Great imagery all the way through. :)

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Phew! Good. I'm glad I didn't lose the thread and leave you scratching your head going, "What was Barb thinking?"

[identity profile] shegollum.livejournal.com 2010-07-06 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
oh man, i was praying for that last line and viggo delivered! yay! this is wonderfully erotic and such a great use of the prompt which is anything but. fantastic!

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-06 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! I'm glad you liked it. The end on this one was fiddly for me, so I'm glad I got it right.

[identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com 2010-07-06 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I love the way this is structured, moving so smoothly from Viggo's musings about what is going on beyond the windows in the picture to his anticipation of what is to come later and the erotic thought of being on display through their own window. The contrast between cosy domesticity with Sean cooking braised beef in wine and his role in the scene Viggo is imagining is masterly. Thank you.

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-07 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
Awww. *g* You're very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] peersrogue.livejournal.com 2010-07-12 09:07 am (UTC)(link)
Loved the image of Sean knocking about cooking in the kitchen - a domestic God and Viggo's erotic musings on the after dinner delights. Like to imagine Sean then morphing into a sexual God after their braised beef and wine. I expect they leave the washing up until the next morning.
Mouth watering - wonderful. Thank you.

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-10-25 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you found it tasty and delicious. ^_^ And hell, yes. The dishes...they can wait.

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2010-07-27 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
*slashgasms*

and what [livejournal.com profile] rifleman_s ^said^ ...

*wibbles*

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-10-25 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
Mwahahahaha!!! Glad you enjoyed it. *grins wickedly*