stars configured oddly here, twirled the night sky at the wrong hours
He would clean himself and curse. And be hard for the next time.
crooning out a name that eventually Odysseus answered to; Sean
This is sooooooo interesting!!! And the last sentence such a surprise. I love the descriptions of all that Odysseus had and what he endured but you built this sense of remotesness, as though he waited for what was to be. Really lovely. If you ever continue this, I'd be eager to read it!
ETA: I didn't look at the prompt pic before but did so afterward and I wanted you to know that you really conveyed that image so well. Looking at the picture is like seeing a snapshot taken of your story, not the place it really is. Brilliant!
ETAA: I scanned the list and see that there are several from you. That is a nice surprise! You are missed here, you know. *hugs*
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stars configured oddly here, twirled the night sky at the wrong hours
He would clean himself and curse. And be hard for the next time.
crooning out a name that eventually Odysseus answered to; Sean
This is sooooooo interesting!!! And the last sentence such a surprise. I love the descriptions of all that Odysseus had and what he endured but you built this sense of remotesness, as though he waited for what was to be. Really lovely. If you ever continue this, I'd be eager to read it!
ETA: I didn't look at the prompt pic before but did so afterward and I wanted you to know that you really conveyed that image so well. Looking at the picture is like seeing a snapshot taken of your story, not the place it really is. Brilliant!
ETAA: I scanned the list and see that there are several from you. That is a nice surprise! You are missed here, you know. *hugs*