ext_47035 ([identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wordsontongue 2011-08-01 06:14 pm (UTC)

There was a real sense at the end of this of Viggo, the traveller, finally coming home, which was very satisfying. Lovely details about Sean's yearning for companionship, poorly concealed by his grumpiness and negativity, harshness to his hands and finally by his bone-wearying work. Sean's last line is lovely! I really enjoyed this. Thank you.

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