I am so glad you enjoyed this, you evil, evil woman! I saw the Doris Day song and the R+ and thought "Yes, oh yes...she is Satan...". ;-) But I got over it. *pokes*

I am really happy that you made the comment: "the reluctance flowed back and forth between them, instead of one of them being certain and the other the careful one". I was worried that would come out muddled or something so that gave me a big smile. You are very generous in your feedback and you made my morning. :-)

(And I'm glad you liked the subtitles and colors. Seemed like fun once I started doing it so I just kept going!)