ext_24699 ([identity profile] foxrafer.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wordsontongue 2011-07-31 08:06 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much for this lovely story! *hugs* Sort of riffing off of something I wrote is a neat idea, and I really like your interpretation. I like how you show Viggo's nerves, continually talking on the way down. It's a great contrast to how Sean is concentrating is so hard he's totally silent. I particularly like how once they're at the ski lifts Sean lets all of his concerns out; I think it shows really well how much he trusts Viggo. This was a wonderful gift; thank you!

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