ext_1519 ([identity profile] splix.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wordsontongue 2011-08-01 04:56 am (UTC)

Ooh, that was fun! Loved the pacing, the slow buildup, and how Sean seems to be way ahead of Viggo.

His shirt was as blue as cornflowers, the sleeves rolled up to reveal slightly tanned, strong arms. "Sean, please." Yes, please. :D

Sean has such an aura of power in this, and perhaps it's Viggo's detachment from society that makes him confused about the signals he's receiving. Of course, Sean knows what he's doing...that subtle command with the chocolate, HUMINA. And I loved that he takes charge so easily, and that Viggo is almost helpless to resist him. But of course. :D This was fabulous, thanks for sharing it! :D

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