Reprise

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Title: Reprise
Author: govi20
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none
Beta: mooms
Prompt(s): #4: exploring, "drunken with the light", and a picture of Zacatecas
Disclaimer: Never happened; I made it all up



For Sean, who had arrived only the day before from a misty England, Zacatecas came almost as a shock. Once, almost ten years ago, they had set out to explore New Zealand in a similar way, discovering much more than just that.

After today's long drive Sean tumbled onto the king-size bed, pulling Viggo down with him. He was still high on sharp colours, still 'drunken with the light', as Viggo had recited in the car and his clothes seemed to somehow suffocate him.

He stretched languorously beneath clever hands, colours and light kept safe behind his now closed eyes.

Comments

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

"...still high on sharp colours..." ==> so incredibly beautiful, govi! i love the way you contrast the brightness of all he's seeing with his need to close his eyes and be touched. perfect.

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback dear; I appreciate it very much!