http://vbmods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] vbmods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wordsontongue2009-07-20 03:14 pm
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Bag o'Sweets

Title: Bag o'Sweets
Author: [livejournal.com profile] helena_s_renn
Rating: PG-15
Warnings: mild rude reference
Prompt(s): #21: discovery, "pinwheels and bags of sweets" and a photograph of The Green Parrot
Disclaimer: As always, this is fiction. It never happened.



Balmy September evening, bright amber-glow spilled onto twilight sidewalk.

After the book-signing of one of Viggo's poet friends, they'd passed on foot a restaurant they'd once frequented.

"What'cha thinking, Sean?"

"A line from one of 'er poems stuck in me 'ead: 'Pinwheels and bags of sweets.'"

"Why that one?"

"Bugger if I know..."

That flash of stealthy interest told Sean he'd soon be helpless in Viggo's hands.

Formality eschewed, they found seats at the bar and proceeded to the loo's shadows. There Viggo made a pinwheel of his tongue, juggling a bag of sweet hard candy till gooey insides melted in his mouth.

[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com 2009-07-20 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! What a wonderful interpretation of the prompt! Dirty and lovely, and it really made me smile. *G* That last line is wonderful, and really caps off the rest perfectly.

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
heh, it's kinda dirty alright... just the way i like them! glad you liked it that way, too!

[identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 09:22 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Fantastic, and I bet Viggo can do that! Big fun!

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
oh, he definitely can! you can see the results (and maybe taste them??) thanks!

[identity profile] kittylass.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee *g*

That flash of stealthy interest told Sean he'd soon be helpless in Viggo's hands.

Yes, leave it to Viggo :P Excellent.

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
yeah, that viggo! sneaky bastard, always gets exactly what he wants. luckily it tends to be what sean wants too. thanks!

[identity profile] sadme4b.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Sneakily suggestive, what fun!

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
suggestive? i guess if you call cocksucking and ball-juggling to get the 'candy' suggestive. ROFL!! loved that! thanks.

[identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Deliciously sweet and dirty! I love the last line too! :)

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
thanks! seems like that line was a hit. love those drrty boyz.

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
That flash of stealthy interest told Sean he'd soon be helpless in Viggo's hands

huh, now why can i imagine that so vividly... oh, right; i'd be the same way. *g*