http://vbmods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] vbmods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wordsontongue2009-07-20 03:32 pm
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Impressions

Title: Impressions
Author: [livejournal.com profile] stormatdusk
Rating: adult
Warnings: None
Prompt(s): #10: giggle and a picture of a pub
Disclaimer: This is only fiction; I don't know these people.
Summary: Viggo appreciates the gifts he receives from his friends.



You like it here, this (relatively) quiet corner booth in the pub, filled with cast and crew. The warm gold walls and the heavy beams at the ceiling encourage you all that much closer. These people have already become part of your chosen family. You let your eyes travel, your ears absorb, and you scribble in your notebook as the impressions parade by.

Karl. Karl makes you think. The two of you can talk late into the night, politics, women, men, the color of a good root beer. Nothing's off limits. Your conversations spark with spirit.

Miranda makes you flirt. The girl is whip-sharp, recklessly beautiful, deliciously mischievous, and completely, utterly above you. She's also generous enough not to let you know it. Very often.

Dom makes you play. The life in his eyes points true north to the fiercely fun creature he is at his core. The practical joking between you is so ruthless that it might seem rather a one-dimensional relationship if you didn't adore him like a brother, as well.

Bill makes you feel. The first time you heard him sing Pippin's song, you had to leave the set, find somewhere private, and let the tears come. You want to cry when you think of him back then, having lost his parents so young, though you never tell him that; he wouldn't want your pity, and he deserves so much more.

Orlando makes you giggle. In another life, you might've been cousins growing up together, the two of you against the world, with secret jokes and constant bantering and funny faces designed to get the other to sink into half-stifled titters at the dinner table, leaving the grown-ups frowning at your manners and just a little jealous.

And there's Sean, standing at the bar, the focus of a small crowd. The beer in one hand swings precariously as he makes a point - no, more likely a punch line - and Mir and David and Phillipa and Elijah and Lawrence dissolve into laughter around him. Inevitably, always, your eyes drink in the lines of him: the breadth of his shoulders, the taper of his waist, the curve of his ass, the lean-muscled legs dusted in exactly the right amount of golden down, legs you can still feel wrapped around you, heels spurring into your ass as you pump your hips, pour everything into him, even after three days now. But tonight ... tonight you want his hands. You want those long, elegant fingers on you, in you, and you're not too proud to ask for it; hell no, you'll beg for it if that's what he wants. And maybe he's also thinking it's time to leave, because at that moment, his eyes meet yours across that room, and your mouth waters.

Sean? Sean makes you moan.

[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com 2009-07-20 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is absolutely delicious. I think it made my mouth water, if you don't mind me saying. ^_^ I love Viggo's observations about all the other people in his chosen family, what they say about him and then, and I love how it all builds to this wonderful crescendo of heat and lust in his observations and memories of Sean. *happysigh* (I think I can almost hear Viggo moan aloud at that very last line.) Using second person as your POV was an interesting choice as well, and really beautifully executed!

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
it would not write in first or third. odd things, fics. :) thanks for the fb.

[identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com 2009-07-20 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
This is such a warm, rich little ficlet and makes me feel as if I am in that cosy pub nursing a drink and seeing everyone through Viggo's eyes. There is so much affection in the way he makes the observations about them all, but everything builds to the figure of Sean, the vivid memories, the eyes meeting across the room and that final moan!

Absolutely delicious! :)

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks so much; i'm glad it worked for you. :)

[identity profile] shegollum.livejournal.com 2009-07-20 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
oh god... adore this. so wonderfully descriptive of what those friendships should be. i am totally head over heels with your description of Miranda.

I want the nights in the bar and hell yeah, i want the night at Viggo's and Sean's, too. :-)

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
yay, thank you; i liked miranda's bit too. :)

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2009-07-20 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
day-AM! if i weren't sitting at the oil change place right now, i'd be moaning, too.

ok, not that i didn't enjoy them all, but this comm being what is i waited for it, teh sean... it was just as hot-delicious-right-there-right-now... i swear that line about sean's 'lines' was foreplay; and the one with legs wrapped and heels digging in about killed me.

i won't insult you by asking for more, it was plenty. i just wish all fic could be so good.

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
so glad it worked for you; thanks, h!

[identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 06:33 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely wonderful fic. I don't have much to add to what the others said, just that it makes me feel good Perfect, thank you for sharing!

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you, govi!

Impressions

[identity profile] argentine65.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Love it. Thank you. Martha

Re: Impressions

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you for reading. :)