Dodging

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Title: Dodging
Author: rubyelf
Characters: Sean / Viggo and other assorted LoTR cast members
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Beta: beccatheeditor
Prompt(s): #10: avoid
Disclaimer: All lies and silliness. Did not happen. For entertainment purposes only, and not for profit.
Summary: Privacy can be hard to find.



"Stupid hobbits," Sean mutters.

Viggo grins, closing the door of the closet behind them.

"Hey! Where are you?"

"Is that Orlando?" Sean complains. "That's even worse."

"We know you came down this hall!" Billy calls.

"And you lost the bet fair and square!" Dominic adds.

"Bet?" Sean asks, raising an eyebrow. "You made a bet with hobbits?"

Viggo smiles sheepishly.

"What was the bet?"

"They bet I couldn't get you to kiss me."

Sean snickers. "Is that what you've been up to all evening?"

"Maybe."

"Aha!" Dominic says, yanking the door open.

Billy looks over Dom's shoulder. "Appears he won."

Comments

[bluegerl.livejournal.com]

I can HEAR that snigger, Boromir!! (Bet he enjoyed helping Aragorn win the bet!!!!) Lovely lovely as always.

[rubyelf.livejournal.com]

I doubt he minded TOO much helping Viggo out... can't have him losing bets to that lot, can he?

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

i love that sean went along with viggo without even knowing why. :D

[rubyelf.livejournal.com]

I suspect he wasn't given the opportunity to ask. Or thought it was a better idea not to.

[alex-quine.livejournal.com]

Although they're stationary there's lots of movement in this scene, in the way that the figures within the closet, can hear their pursuers coming closer and closer, whilst your Sean manages to extract from Viggo exactly what he's got into and then, at the vital last moment, the POV switches about and we don't need to be told what the hobbits have found on opening the closet door. Great fun!

[rubyelf.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it... the hobbits don't seem very surprised, though. Maybe they were expecting to lose.

[j-flattermann.livejournal.com]

Had me in stitches all the way through. Clever Viggo, clever Ruby.

[rubyelf.livejournal.com]

Thank you! So many of these are hilarious...

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love this. Such a fun feeling throughout but then the absolutely spot-on sound of Billy's final comment has me grinning big time. :-) So glad you shared.

[rubyelf.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed. I wouldn't have minded being the one to find them making out in the closet...

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Big fun and very Viggo-ish too!

[vjezkova.livejournal.com]

Ah, very lovely, you cornered me there too, I had fun, thanks!

[mooms.livejournal.com]

Great fun! :D

[savageseraph.livejournal.com]

Hee!!! This is just fun and grand!!!

[caras-galadhon.livejournal.com]

*snicker* Lovely and entertaining. And I get the sense that Viggo knew the bet would be a sure thing. ^_~

[foxrafer.livejournal.com]

*giggles* I love that all he had to do was ask. :-) Really fun!