This was exquisite. The alternating POV and pace are so effective in revealing their characters and history, their reservations, sadness, longing and hope. So many small moments that were so ordinarily real -- thank you.
(Boiled peanuts -- am I missing something I should try?)
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Date: 2011-08-10 02:45 am (UTC)(Boiled peanuts -- am I missing something I should try?)