I think that you managed very well to convey the differences in their personalities and I liked the way that you took one of foxrafer's own fics as inspiration. As you were new to the Exchange, it was the most sensible approach to read some of her work before writing. :D
Reading this reminded me of those comments they made on the Extended Edition DVDs too. Nicely done and totally believable.
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Date: 2011-08-01 05:27 pm (UTC)Reading this reminded me of those comments they made on the Extended Edition DVDs too. Nicely done and totally believable.