Thaw

Jun. 24th, 2009 07:19 am
[identity profile] vbmods.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] wordsontongue

Title: Thaw
Author: Bluespirit ([livejournal.com profile] bluespirit_star)
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] xanthelj
Prompt: #24 frozen
Disclaimer: The following story is a work of fiction. The author is not making any claims as to the real life sexualities or preferences of the people portrayed here. This is purely for entertainment, not profit.
Author's Note: Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] xanthelj for looking this over and to [livejournal.com profile] foxrafer for organizing this lovely celebration.



The sky was dark - the stars hidden by heavy swathes of cloud and the moon only a faint glow through the savagery of the swirling snow.

Viggo closed his eyes and turned his face to the heavens. Snowflakes dusted his eyelashes, and he felt frozen, immobile with cold and contemplation.

He heard a door open behind him and then warm hands cupped his cheeks and soft lips were pressing against his mouth.

"Silly bugger."

He opened his eyes.

Sean was smiling. "Come back inside, love. It's cold out here."

He took Sean's hand and nodded - though he wasn't cold anymore.

Date: 2009-06-24 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com
That was lovely. I have a nice warm glow now!

Date: 2009-06-25 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you! These two just make me melt. ♥

Date: 2009-06-24 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com
A tiny moment, but conveying a world of love and trust. thanks for posting.

Date: 2009-06-25 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2009-06-24 04:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
Hee. Awwww. How wonderful! The image of the swirling snow, the stars and moon is gorgeous, and I can really feel the cold. And of course, the contrast of warmth, both from Sean and the beckoning inside is perfect. I love the affection in, "Silly bugger," and how Viggo is warmed just by Sean's presence. Lovely!

Date: 2009-06-25 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you!
I just imagined Viggo standing there in the snow & Sean sort of shaking his head fondly at him & drawing him back inside. :-)

Date: 2009-06-24 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
That was evocative and lovely. Thank you. :)

Date: 2009-06-25 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you! :-)

Date: 2009-06-24 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] govi20.livejournal.com
Lovely and very imagnative!Love it.

Date: 2009-06-25 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you. :-)

Date: 2009-06-24 09:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shegollum.livejournal.com
this makes me think of the holidays! :-) there is something magical about the night sky and i adore how you have viggo's doing of it broken only by a kiss like a spell in a fairy tale.

Date: 2009-06-25 10:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
I hadn't thought of it like that but what a lovely image. :-)

Date: 2009-06-25 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
The cold, crispness of snow and stars contrast so nicely with the warmth of Sean's gesture and words.

Date: 2009-06-25 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you!
I think these two have such different personalities but make such a lovely match. I like playing with the idea of contrasts. :-)

Date: 2009-06-25 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rifleman-s.livejournal.com
Very nice. You can't always take the child out of the man . . . but perfect understanding of that between them.

Date: 2009-06-26 09:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Yeah, I think Sean sometimes has to be the grown-up when Vig's off lost in the beauty of the sky, etc. *g*

Date: 2009-06-25 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laura-iskra.livejournal.com
awww, that was a sweet moment!

Date: 2009-06-26 09:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you, sweetheart!

Date: 2009-06-26 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foxrafer.livejournal.com
I can see it all, this gorgeous picture in my mind. Romance will never be dead as long as you are writing, my friend. This is beautiful.

Date: 2009-06-29 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Aw, thanks so much, sweetheart.
*hugs*
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2009-06-27 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittylass.livejournal.com
That was a wonderful moment *sighs* I like that Sean sort of reels him back in from his frozen state :) Thank you!

Date: 2009-06-29 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you!
Yes, that's exactly what Sean does - he's like an anchor to the real world. :-)

Date: 2009-07-04 06:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dalehead.livejournal.com
You kept quiet about this one didn't you *g*

*hugs*

Gorgeous.

Date: 2009-07-04 08:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you! ♥

I did make a mention on my lj but it may have been swamped by all my Big Bang rambling. *g*

Date: 2009-07-18 08:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com
i just sat in the first line and enjoyed for a while before continuing reading. thank you!

Date: 2009-07-31 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Thank you so much.
I love writing from Viggo's point of view as he's so lyrical. ♥
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