Partnership

Jul. 4th, 2010 04:16 am
[identity profile] vbmods.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] wordsontongue
Title: Partnership
Author: [livejournal.com profile] savageseraph
Pairing: Nikolai Luzhin/Alex Trevelyan
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] caras_galadhon
Prompt(s): #13: comity
Disclaimer: Don't own the characters or worlds. Just play with them for my own entertainment.
Summary: Alec wondered when each would see the other as a liability, a loose end that needed to be tied up and snipped off.



Their relationship started out as a delicate balancing act, a polite accord and professional respect between two predators acquainted with tact, but familiar with violence. Alec knew that it was common profit, not fear or obligation, that kept Nikolai at his side, and consent freely given can be just as freely withdrawn. He wondered if Nikolai already planned for the day when their partnership would dissolve, when each would see the other as a liability, a loose end that needed to be tied up and snipped off.

Alec had disposed of enough people who were no longer of use to him that he barely felt a twinge at taking their lives. Would he be able to dispatch Nikolai without flinching? If or when it came to that? Alec's gaze moved over Nikolai's body, always so carefully concealed beneath layers of clothing. A quick glance around the pub confirmed what he suspected: he wasn't the only person undressing Nikolai with his eyes, but he was the only person Nikolai would be leaving with. That thought brought a smile to his lips.

Perhaps this would be the night he decided to end the slow tease of Nikolai's presence. Close enough to touch, but always untouchable. Perhaps this would be the night Alec stripped off Nikolai's clothes and then stripped down his defenses, demolished his fortifications with slick fingers and a wicked tongue. Alec knocked back his vodka, humming in pleasure at its smooth burn.

It wouldn't be just a good hard fuck that would crack Nikolai's cool exterior. Time enough in prison would have taught him to endure that. Being forced to enjoy it? lec laughed softly, eyes darkening as he shifted in his chair, hand coming to rest on his erection.

Nikolai would enjoy it; Alec would see to that. He wondered if that would make Nikolai more likely to kill him or stay with him. He wondered if it mattered.

Date: 2010-07-04 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-flattermann.livejournal.com
I love the way you end or rather open ended the story.

“He wondered if it mattered.”

;D

Date: 2010-07-05 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
The end of this one had me stumped for a bit, so I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-07-04 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com
There is a future irony beneath the surface here, in that Alec may well find that 'making' Nikolai enjoy their coupling could be the crack in his own brittle armour. thanks for sharing.

Date: 2010-07-05 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
Aha! Yes. I have trouble with short forms, and this was one that kept wanting to sprawl so I could explore things like that more.

Date: 2010-07-04 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com
those last two paragraphs were total killers. fitting, with these two ;) it is fics like these that make me recall your username and know just how very appropriate it is.

Date: 2010-07-05 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
Awww. I fretted the ending a bit on this one, so I'm glad it worked for you.

*grins* My fics were a bit brighter and sweeter back in the day. Perhaps I've grown into my username. Mwahahaha....

Date: 2010-07-04 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
I love Alec's musings on his relationship with Nikolai, and the dangerous edge that slides underneath. And that last line really tops off a strong fic. Really nicely done.

Date: 2010-07-05 11:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
Well, with these two, there sorta has to be that edge. Although...I could have them go out to shop next time. *g*

Date: 2010-07-06 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
*snort* Only if you promise they'll be shopping for curtains. And maybe matching aprons. ^_~

Date: 2010-07-05 06:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
One of the fascinating things about this pairing is that they are such a couple of predators - it only seems a matter of time until the balance tips one way or the other. Alec's possessiveness is thrilling, but dangerous. Great stuff.

Date: 2010-07-05 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
Mmmmhmmm, and I do so like to watch predators playing with one another. Glad you liked it! *beams*

Date: 2010-07-05 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shegollum.livejournal.com
I love how you've shown so much through Sean's eyes. His anticipation and determination say so much. Wonderful.

Date: 2010-07-05 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
Thanks! ^_^

Date: 2010-07-05 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com
I do love this pairing and you have really hit the edginess and danger of their relationship and the fact that it will undoubtedly end in the death of one or both of them.

Date: 2010-07-06 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
Yes. But it will burn fiercely while it lasts.

Date: 2010-07-06 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peersrogue.livejournal.com
Sizzling - will the elegant sleek puma bring down the Siberian Tiger? Delicious, although one does wonder Alec, if the best laid plans etc etc
Many thanks

Date: 2010-07-07 12:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
Thank you for the lovely feedback. *g*

Profile

Your Words on My Tongue

April 2017

S M T W T F S
      1
2345 678
9101112131415
16171819202122
23242526272829
30      

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jul. 31st, 2025 07:47 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios