http://vbmods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] vbmods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wordsontongue2010-07-04 04:18 am
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Shelter

Title: Shelter
Author: Kris ([livejournal.com profile] ribby)
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Prompt(s): #s 15 and 23: "to remember also means to learn" and a picture of discarded books on the side of train tracks.
Disclaimer: Don't own them, not making any money
Summary: Shelter isn't always physical.



He's been fidgety all day, can't seem to settle.

He's tried painting, but the colors come out wrong, muted. Poetry, likewise.

He picks up a book he'd found abandoned by the railroad tracks, opens it. Words tumble across his eyes, snatches of language.

"to remember also means to learn"
"how far off coast do you have to go
to be sheltered from the rain"

Yes. He dials, and as the voice on the other end greets him, everything clears.

"Hi, Sean."

Not far at all for shelter. He remembers again this friendship's joy ... and is finally at peace.

[identity profile] j-flattermann.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 01:28 pm (UTC)(link)
This is simply lovely. Exactly how friendship works. ;D
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean "ready")

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you--yes, it really does, doesn't it? So glad you enjoyed this!

~Kris
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[personal profile] afra_schatz 2010-07-04 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
What a beautiful, quiet call out for friendship. Lovely!
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean "smile")

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
The Viggo in my head is like this a lot of the time--thankfully, he has Sean. *grin*

So glad you enjoyed this, and thank you!

~Kris
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[personal profile] makamu 2010-07-04 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, you have a way of striking all my emotional chords today. A wonderful portrayal of an important friendship :)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean "ready")

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Everyone needs a friend like this, I think...

Thank you, Tessy, and I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

~Kris

[identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Great sense of atmosphere, of the restless, unsatisfactory, beginning where his every move seems frustrated, except this one, the one that reaches out to a friend. thanks for sharing.
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean "smile")

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I've had days like this of my own, and thankfully, I've had friends to upll me out of it--I figured Viggo deserved his own moment. *grin*

So glad you enjoyed this, Alex, and thank you!

~Kris

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
sometimes nothing else will do than a certain friend or friendship. viggo has found himself in one of those times. i'm glad sean was there to answer him.
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Blue-eyed stranger)

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Sean is always there--that's why Viggo loves him. *grin*

So glad you enjoyed this, and thanks!

~Kris

[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com 2010-07-04 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Really beautifully done. This is wonderful, and done with such a deft, light touch.
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Blue-eyed stranger)

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Of the three, this was the hardest one, so I'm glad to hear it works so well and you like it--always makes me smile.

~Kris

[identity profile] splix.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 06:50 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, what a wonderful moment. Thank you for that.
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Smiling Sharpe)

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
You're very welcome--I'm so glad you like it!

And your icon makes me "awww" and giggle at the same time...

~Kris

[identity profile] peersrogue.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 11:58 am (UTC)(link)
You have captured the essence of true friendship. Re3aching out to the one heart that is always open. Lovely many thanks.
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Smiling Sean)

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Exactly--and I do believe that their friendship is like this...

So glad you enjoyed this, and thank you!

~Kris

[identity profile] shegollum.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
i love the connection -- and the randomness of what reminded him of it, made him reach for it. so lovely.
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Smiling Sean)

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
For Viggo, it's always about words... and I'm glad that came through here.

So pleased you enjoyed it, and thanks!

~Kris

[identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com 2010-07-05 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
This is lovely, from the very effective beginning, with Viggo's inability to settle so vividly expressed, his finding the book and remembering that he has shelter in his friendship, to his reaching out and finally being at peace.
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Blue-eyed stranger)

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
A good friendship gives you all that, and hopefully humor too! *grin*

So glad you enjoyed this, and thanks!

~Kris

[identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com 2010-07-06 01:10 am (UTC)(link)
I've had writing days like you've described. So nice that Viggo foud a good way to shake off the funk.
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Blue eyes and a grin)

[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2010-07-10 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, me too... actually, this fic was borne out of a particularly bad writing day. So I suppose it's cathartic for me as well!

Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks!

~Kris

[identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com 2010-08-07 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Not far at all for shelter

lovely.