Shelter

Jul. 4th, 2010 04:18 am
[identity profile] vbmods.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] wordsontongue
Title: Shelter
Author: Kris ([livejournal.com profile] ribby)
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Prompt(s): #s 15 and 23: "to remember also means to learn" and a picture of discarded books on the side of train tracks.
Disclaimer: Don't own them, not making any money
Summary: Shelter isn't always physical.



He's been fidgety all day, can't seem to settle.

He's tried painting, but the colors come out wrong, muted. Poetry, likewise.

He picks up a book he'd found abandoned by the railroad tracks, opens it. Words tumble across his eyes, snatches of language.

"to remember also means to learn"
"how far off coast do you have to go
to be sheltered from the rain"

Yes. He dials, and as the voice on the other end greets him, everything clears.

"Hi, Sean."

Not far at all for shelter. He remembers again this friendship's joy ... and is finally at peace.

Date: 2010-07-04 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-flattermann.livejournal.com
This is simply lovely. Exactly how friendship works. ;D

Date: 2010-07-10 06:29 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean "ready")
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
Thank you--yes, it really does, doesn't it? So glad you enjoyed this!

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-04 02:17 pm (UTC)
afra_schatz: (Vigbean Hug)
From: [personal profile] afra_schatz
What a beautiful, quiet call out for friendship. Lovely!

Date: 2010-07-10 06:30 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean "smile")
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
The Viggo in my head is like this a lot of the time--thankfully, he has Sean. *grin*

So glad you enjoyed this, and thank you!

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-04 04:16 pm (UTC)
makamu: (Default)
From: [personal profile] makamu
Oh, you have a way of striking all my emotional chords today. A wonderful portrayal of an important friendship :)

Date: 2010-07-10 06:30 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean "ready")
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
Everyone needs a friend like this, I think...

Thank you, Tessy, and I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-04 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com
Great sense of atmosphere, of the restless, unsatisfactory, beginning where his every move seems frustrated, except this one, the one that reaches out to a friend. thanks for sharing.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:31 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Bean "smile")
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
I've had days like this of my own, and thankfully, I've had friends to upll me out of it--I figured Viggo deserved his own moment. *grin*

So glad you enjoyed this, Alex, and thank you!

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-04 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com
sometimes nothing else will do than a certain friend or friendship. viggo has found himself in one of those times. i'm glad sean was there to answer him.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:32 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Blue-eyed stranger)
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
Sean is always there--that's why Viggo loves him. *grin*

So glad you enjoyed this, and thanks!

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-04 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
Really beautifully done. This is wonderful, and done with such a deft, light touch.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:33 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Blue-eyed stranger)
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
Thanks! Of the three, this was the hardest one, so I'm glad to hear it works so well and you like it--always makes me smile.

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-05 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] splix.livejournal.com
Oh, what a wonderful moment. Thank you for that.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:33 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Smiling Sharpe)
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
You're very welcome--I'm so glad you like it!

And your icon makes me "awww" and giggle at the same time...

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-05 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peersrogue.livejournal.com
You have captured the essence of true friendship. Re3aching out to the one heart that is always open. Lovely many thanks.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:34 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Smiling Sean)
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
Exactly--and I do believe that their friendship is like this...

So glad you enjoyed this, and thank you!

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-05 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shegollum.livejournal.com
i love the connection -- and the randomness of what reminded him of it, made him reach for it. so lovely.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:35 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Smiling Sean)
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
For Viggo, it's always about words... and I'm glad that came through here.

So pleased you enjoyed it, and thanks!

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-05 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com
This is lovely, from the very effective beginning, with Viggo's inability to settle so vividly expressed, his finding the book and remembering that he has shelter in his friendship, to his reaching out and finally being at peace.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:35 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Blue-eyed stranger)
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
A good friendship gives you all that, and hopefully humor too! *grin*

So glad you enjoyed this, and thanks!

~Kris

Date: 2010-07-06 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savageseraph.livejournal.com
I've had writing days like you've described. So nice that Viggo foud a good way to shake off the funk.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:36 pm (UTC)
ext_29523: JW Waterhouse's Miranda (Blue eyes and a grin)
From: [identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com
Oh, me too... actually, this fic was borne out of a particularly bad writing day. So I suppose it's cathartic for me as well!

Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks!

~Kris

Date: 2010-08-07 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormatdusk.livejournal.com
Not far at all for shelter

lovely.
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