The Feel of Words

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Title: The Feel of Words
Author: shegollum
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Prompt(s): #12: the speech of wandering
Disclaimer: Completely untrue but very nice to imagine.



There's speech in silence and messages in meandering. Words of wisdom float down and touch the wandering. I know it ... I hear the sounds. Syllables and sentences brush against my tired skin as surely as the grass and the trees and the rain.

Sean is a voice all his own. When he sleeps, warm love pours from him and I hear the singing of his soul. Making love with him is fiery music; running my fingers along his spine is softer-than-rain drumbeats, down his thigh, tangled poems made of velvet. Every gaze speaks volumes and welcomes me home with secret whispers.

Comments

[govi20.livejournal.com]

This is so beautiful, reads like poetry. What great use of the prompt!

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

thank you so much! foxrafer comes up with such WONDERFUL prompts. i am so thrilled with all of these fics. :-) so much talent in vb world. thank you again!

[makamu]

Such interesting metaphors and thoughts -this fic felt like Viggo's thoughts :) Very well-done

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

thank you so much. i love thoughts that feel like sounds or look like colors. thank you again!

[j-flattermann.livejournal.com]

Almost too beautiful for words.

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

what a very generous comment! thank you so much.

[helena-s-renn.livejournal.com]

gorgeous, absolute poetry. the first three sentences of the 2nd paragraph are ones i'm sure i'll be back for again and again.

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

thank you so much, helena! i am so happy that you like this.

[caras-galadhon.livejournal.com]

Quite a captivating piece. ^_^

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

thank you!

[splix.livejournal.com]

It feels like a song, the cadence and harmonies of it. Thank you!

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

thank you so much. i really appreciate your comment!

[peersrogue.livejournal.com]

Amazing, wonderful imagery. It will stay with me - many thanks.

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

i am so happy to receive your generous feedback. thank you so much!

[mooms.livejournal.com]

Poetic and simply beautiful!

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

*smooshes* thank you!

[savageseraph.livejournal.com]

Making love with him is fiery music; running my fingers along his spine is softer-than-rain drumbeats, down his thigh, tangled poems made of velvet.

This! That description is just lovely!

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

thank you so very much!!

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. I had a lot of fun imagining those fingers trailing along that body! :-)

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

There's speech in silence

running my fingers along his spine is softer-than-rain drumbeats

tangled poems made of velvet

oh yes, just like that.

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

*beams*