Night

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Title: Night
Author: govi20
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Beta: mooms
Prompt(s): #24: "quiet in the car, moving through the night"
Disclaimer: Written for fun, not for profit and all lies.



Earlier, Sean had pulled him into an embrace, a manly hug, one that lingered just a little longer than strictly needed, in retrospect. That's when something inside of Viggo snapped and Sean's proximity, his smell, were just too much.

He had pushed Sean against the car and had swallowed his grunt of surprise by kissing him persistently, until the fight left Sean's body and he kissed back, allowing Viggo's hands to explore soft, warm skin.

Somehow they got inside Viggo's car, driving through the dark night without speaking and fuck knows where, but they would know when they got there.

Comments

[shegollum.livejournal.com]

The thought of the 'manly hug' changing into something so incendiary is soooo sensual. Lovely. I like the open-ended promise of the ending. Thank you for sharing!

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, dear!

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!

[bluegerl.livejournal.com]

'swallowed his grunt of surprise' that's just perfect.(and went on kissing...mmmmpph!)

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Thank you for your comment; I appreciate it!

[alex-quine.livejournal.com]

There's a torrent of emotion and wanting and needing unleashed here in a moment, but for all the scene ends in silence and far from 'home' they are safe, carried away on the tide.

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Thank you for your nice comment Alex!

[j-flattermann.livejournal.com]

Mmh, full of promises and yet…
The end is as open as the horizon they were driving towards and we all know that at some point the two will stop.
Let’s hope that you let us be there with you when they do.

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Thank you for suxh nice comment!

[helena-s-renn.livejournal.com]

they would know when they got there. that's practically a metaphor, and it's so winsome. wish we could all go along for that ride...

damn, do i love the idea of viggo kissing sean into submission.

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Helenal I am pleased you like this.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

as if you were there watching them!

yum!!!

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Oh.. I wished! Thank you

[mooms.livejournal.com]

I do love this one and as helena says, the idea of Viggo kissing Sean into submission is very seductive! Wherever they are going, it'll be a terrific ride! :D

[savageseraph.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm, I like how the innocent hug ignites some not-so-innocent things and also the promise in the ending.

[caras-galadhon.livejournal.com]

Wonderful! I love how aggressive and passionate this whole scene is. And I love how the ride is a nice metaphor for their burgeoning relationship: who knows where they're going, but they'll know when they get there. ^_~

[foxrafer.livejournal.com]

Love the dual meaning of that last line and the urgency of that moment.